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Pati is 3% done
"Rosy, almost feminine glow on his cheeks "... Huh? What is different between male and female cheeks?
Jul 10, 2016 09:36AM
Hot Off the Press (Ridgemont University #1)

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Pati
Pati is 25% done
DNF... I don't like either main character. They both seem like wushu washy idiots nor do I feel as though they are meant to be the main focus. Add in the very obvious hateful female and the errors... Well I just don't care. Life's too short.
Jul 10, 2016 10:55AM
Hot Off the Press (Ridgemont University #1)


Pati
Pati is 8% done
The correct word is imagined NOT imaged.... Ugh! I was really looking forward to a book set in South Africa... Sigh
Jul 10, 2016 10:00AM
Hot Off the Press (Ridgemont University #1)


Pati
Pati is 8% done
Sigh... Tense errors... Sigh... SMH
Jul 10, 2016 09:56AM
Hot Off the Press (Ridgemont University #1)


Pati
Pati is 7% done
"with not an eye was left unrolled in the house".... Ummmm.... Grammar???
Jul 10, 2016 09:55AM
Hot Off the Press (Ridgemont University #1)


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