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is 28% done
Not bad so far.. but I’m struggling with how OVERLY descriptive it is. It feels more like a play by play at times.
Also maybe this is me, but the author has said people “shook their heads” numerous times when someone asked them a yes or no question, and that prompt always meant yes. I would never read “shook their head” and think they meant yes.
— Mar 02, 2025 05:53PM
Also maybe this is me, but the author has said people “shook their heads” numerous times when someone asked them a yes or no question, and that prompt always meant yes. I would never read “shook their head” and think they meant yes.
