Pati’s Reviews > Santa of the Creek > Status Update

"I love pizza and beer and wings"..... apparently the author forgot that we've been told more than once that he doesn't drink! Oops! All tell, no show, non-American phrases, repeating, timeline hard to follow..... etc. SMH.... I really need to not read this author.

WTH?! This is one of the major obstacles! Instead of learning more along with the other MC we just get get tol....."When Dean finishe"..... WTF?! SMH....

That's odd. Caffeine is used to treat migraines not cause them.