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Vivd
is on page 159 of 474
Listen the description says nothing about having any romance subplot (I think) so tell me why there is so much immediate pining/attraction/everyone has a love interest IN THE FIRST 100 PAGES!! If you are going to make everyone be a couple at least have some angst and some build up what is this insta love business? I signed up for a cool fantasy book with assassins and murder not whatever this is
— Mar 06, 2025 05:10PM
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Vivd
is on page 400 of 474
Sora had a past lover apparently but we don’t hear anything about them. Her lover got killed by her boss basically. But before that they had survived…so why is she worried about her kiss accidentally killing Ty when she has most likely kissed someone before and they were fine?? What in the irrelevant plot hole is this
— Mar 09, 2025 03:32PM
Vivd
is on page 385 of 474
I’m gonna bet the plan is going to go like this
-all goes well until the girl steals the crown
- instead of doing the plan she goes Rouge somehow
- betrayal to all of her found family peers and a big reveal
- her guard will have to keep protecting her even through the betrayal because that’s what he promised
I’m like 90% sure something like that will happen because it seems sooo obvious
— Mar 09, 2025 03:19PM
-all goes well until the girl steals the crown
- instead of doing the plan she goes Rouge somehow
- betrayal to all of her found family peers and a big reveal
- her guard will have to keep protecting her even through the betrayal because that’s what he promised
I’m like 90% sure something like that will happen because it seems sooo obvious
Vivd
is on page 346 of 474
And suddenly its a murder mystery with the killer being SO OBVIOUS OH MY GOD there is almost no subtlety in this book 😭😭
— Mar 09, 2025 02:49PM
Vivd
is on page 290 of 474
This would genuinely be a good book if the romance and flimsy excuse of sexual tension wasn’t steeped into every other sentence the author wrote. The plot would have been so cool if they actually put in the effort of focusing on their goals and not how everyone is vaguely attracted to everyone else
— Mar 08, 2025 01:19PM
