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Martina
is 21% done
I'm dragging this... I feel like it was a great premise but it's not engaging me. Let's hope it gets better since we still have a long way to go 😅
— Mar 08, 2025 02:29AM
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Martina
is 50% done
I finally managed to understand what was bothering me!
Whilst it was nice to jump immediately into action from page 1, after about 15% of the book I was bored even if interested...
The thing is we have intriguing characters, a magical detailed world, the plot is going.... What is the problem?!
STORYTELLING, NARRATION.
At some point this book needed a pause, maybe even some sort of flashback to frame its world.
— Mar 08, 2025 05:46PM
Whilst it was nice to jump immediately into action from page 1, after about 15% of the book I was bored even if interested...
The thing is we have intriguing characters, a magical detailed world, the plot is going.... What is the problem?!
STORYTELLING, NARRATION.
At some point this book needed a pause, maybe even some sort of flashback to frame its world.
Martina
is 8% done
New ARC 🫶🏻
I'm not sure I'm into her writing style, but I appreciate the way she went straight into action.
Also the fantasy building seems interesting ✨
— Mar 01, 2025 04:30AM
I'm not sure I'm into her writing style, but I appreciate the way she went straight into action.
Also the fantasy building seems interesting ✨
