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Samantha
Samantha is 45% done
The dialogue. It’s so bad. It doesn’t flow, it doesn’t sound natural. It’s flat. It’s all “I’m sorry” and “I love you” over and over again. Plus, when multiple characters are in agreement, they ALL have to contribute. Also, a lot of the action is summarized instead of being experienced. I still want to know how it’s all going to turn out but the dialogue is hard to get through sometimes.
Mar 08, 2025 06:36AM
Demon Reform Academy: Term 3

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