carrotitties’s Reviews > By Her Sight > Status Update

The writing is so weird for me lol. I’m getting all itchy… nah-uh. Too much explanation too fast and too sudden. Feeling like a tv series episode where the narrator is telling the whole story before anything actually happens. Don’t tell me, show me. Huff… maybe another time. The story is not bad, mind you. So I’ll definitely come back to finish. Just… not today.