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I was looking fwd to this one cuz I thought the premise is right up my alley but the writing is giving "hello fellow sibling" ........ and its like way too verbose and overexplaining things which I understand the impulse to do that and thats how I talk in my regular life but you can't write a book that way ........ well you can if you wanna write a subpar book