Pyper (vanillaprtty)’s Reviews > Kindred Spirits at Harling Hall > Status Update
Pyper (vanillaprtty)
is 7% done
Why is Florence’s first chapter basically just a rehashing of the chapter before? Couldn’t this all be implied, rather than directly repeating the dialogue in full?
— Mar 11, 2025 07:50AM
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Pyper (vanillaprtty)
is 72% done
rn I’m feeling like the romance could’ve been left out of this
— Mar 12, 2025 01:37PM
Pyper (vanillaprtty)
is 65% done
Callie grew a backbone! things are picking up!
— Mar 12, 2025 01:13PM
Pyper (vanillaprtty)
is 41% done
I love the concept, but I’m 41% in and basically nothing has happened besides repetitive comments from Callie about money troubles and being “in over her head”. None of the characters have any depth as of yet, and if a romance is supposed to blossom between Brodie and Callie, OR the ghosts come around and Callie fits perfectly, it surely should start soon…
— Mar 12, 2025 08:46AM
