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Yet all you’ve ordered is a small bowl of fish soup, and a large pitcher of water. You’ve drank seven glasses.” She's chugged all this water and the reader never knew she was even drinking anything?!
— Jul 17, 2016 10:07PM
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Matthew
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When a diver was resurfacing and the pressure on them decreased, there was a risk of blacking out. That risk increased if they paused or exhaled. Carrie exhaled at the end of her ascent *facepalm*
— Jul 19, 2016 01:26AM
Matthew
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At one hundred fifty meters, they reached the spreading seafloor. Unless Keene left something out, their dive would shatter the world record by 30 to 50 meters, depending on its classification. Someone call Guiness World Records!!
— Jul 19, 2016 01:25AM
Matthew
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Paolo watched the seagulls circle and wheel and squawk for a moment. There are *NO* Gulls in Mauritius.
— Jul 17, 2016 11:07PM
Matthew
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Seabirds squawked angrily overhead, *snip* one of them flew back up, clutching a wriggling fish in its talons, No, just no. There is no "seabird" there that catches fish that way; it's all about the bill for "seabirds".
— Jul 17, 2016 10:53PM
Matthew
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“That rash is a particularly lovely color. It matches your eyes.” Most rashes from the bends disappear within hours but our girl here has one four days later. Ok. They apparently never turn blue or green like a bruise so that leaves only a handful of colors for the rash and her eyes. Red? Gray? Black? I'm confused! What's up with her red, gray or black eyes?!?
— Jul 17, 2016 10:39PM
Matthew
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Carrie finished her seventh glass of water to keep herself from responding. *snip a paragraph of someone else talking* Carrie nearly spit her water out. “W-what?” Wait, I thought she already downed seven glasses of water or can that guy count? She's nearly spitting out her water after he finishes talking? What was she doing, holding it in her mouth?
— Jul 17, 2016 10:09PM
Matthew
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A public transportation bus chortled down the street, belching exhaust. TIL: buses can chortle. Ok I get what he's writing but wow, this really nags at me.
— Jul 17, 2016 06:52AM

