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Avery
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The tension isn’t thick, it’s bone-set, in a way that feels real. The world isn’t shallow yet the reader can understand it just as deeply as Nina.
My biggest priority is getting to know her better
— Mar 13, 2025 02:21PM
My biggest priority is getting to know her better
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Avery
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It is continuing in a good direction that really strengthens its nonlinear attributes
— Mar 15, 2025 01:03PM
Avery
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“You don’t believe there’s a God?”
“Oh, I believe there’s a God. But I’d spit in his hand before I shook it.”
— Mar 13, 2025 05:01PM
“Oh, I believe there’s a God. But I’d spit in his hand before I shook it.”
Avery
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“I was young. I was not the weapon they thought me”
— Mar 13, 2025 02:24PM
Avery
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As much as I love magical schools, I love that we get a character who is allowed to grow up and I love that the worldbuilding moves further than the magical school. Especially because we aren’t supposed to romanticize Artisans.
— Mar 13, 2025 02:16PM
Avery
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“And I smiled. I was only twelve. Later, it would be a litany. A lullaby. /you were only twelve. You couldn’t have known./“
— Mar 08, 2025 09:24AM
