Carla’s Reviews > Flesh and Bone - Book One - Awakening > Status Update

I’m going to go ahead and stop reading here. I’m becoming more and more frustrated with the typos and tense errors, as well as a few descriptions that are confusing. I’d love to see this author find a solid proof reader who is not afraid to make changes and point out errors for his future books.

So far I’m looking forward to settling into the characters and story a bit more. There are some metaphors and imagery in the start of this that makes me think the author will be painting vivid pictures later. The book could have used more thorough proofreading. Constant switches between past and present tense and some confusing sentences make the read less enjoyable. And what was with the whole maaaxxxxxxxxx thing?