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Jasmine
is on page 84 of 560
I'm not a fan of authors that replace common phrases and words for their world-building. I'm not at the stage where I completely hate it though, so I think I'll be able to get through this book and hopefully the next one in the series after this.
Example:
"God, why did I do that?" would be "Creators, why did I do that?" in the book...
— Mar 21, 2025 12:20AM
Example:
"God, why did I do that?" would be "Creators, why did I do that?" in the book...
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Jasmine
is on page 515 of 560
I take back whatever I said before (but only half of the sentiments) because the story got a lot spicer at the end.. I guess it's setting up its pacing for the series?
Still some aspects about the FL that I don't prefer, but will get through the book first!
— Jul 03, 2025 11:27PM
Still some aspects about the FL that I don't prefer, but will get through the book first!
Jasmine
is on page 482 of 560
I don't like the aspect of FLs always being the "broken one" and sacrificing themselves for the ML
— Jun 29, 2025 09:46PM
Jasmine
is on page 425 of 560
I feel like certain specific details are not necessary? The more graphic ones? It's like neither here nor there but I guess it's marginally relevant... Will try to complete this book soon after delaying for a long while
— Jun 27, 2025 12:06AM
Jasmine
is on page 362 of 560
I went through 3 sections I liked. Hurhur.
Other than that, it got a bit too long to get to a good section, I think the start of the book was too dragged out 🤔
— Mar 29, 2025 07:33PM
Other than that, it got a bit too long to get to a good section, I think the start of the book was too dragged out 🤔
