Liv’s Reviews > The Law of the Elementari > Status Update
Liv
is 64% done
I feel like this book would’ve benefited from another draft before publishing—so many things (annabelle’s sketchbook, the whip, just in this chapter) aren’t foreshadowed or mentioned earlier at all and I feel like it would’ve been caught by another draft and more rigorous editing
— Mar 25, 2025 01:14PM
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Liv
is 70% done
why does every conversation in this book end at an extremely unnatural stopping point
like they’re walking away or a scene is ending mid-conversation and it’s happened at least five times wtf is up with that
— Mar 25, 2025 01:57PM
like they’re walking away or a scene is ending mid-conversation and it’s happened at least five times wtf is up with that
Liv
is 62% done
bro why weren’t the laws included at the start of the book?? I feel like it would make so much sense and give a peek into the world early on!!
— Mar 25, 2025 12:46PM
Liv
is 59% done
annabelle asks ZERO questions about anything around her when she’s not on-page i stg
— Mar 25, 2025 12:15PM
Liv
is 36% done
I love the concepts in this story—it’s really refreshing to see a take on elemental magic where the struggle comes from containing the power rather than making it stronger, and the elverkin are a cool twist on the idea of familiars. However, so far I’m pretty underwhelmed by the writing. Hoping it improves in the second half.
— Mar 25, 2025 07:59AM
