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The font is huge! This is more of a novella than a novel. Some of the character justifications are getting a bit redundant and the vocabulary of the writer should never be as limited as their notably ignorant main character's IQ. Jus' sayin'. But this thing should've been a movie from the start. It's written too poorly to be a novel. It reads like a screenplay.
— Jan 08, 2012 12:18PM
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