EliMess’s Reviews > The Town the World Forgot > Status Update
EliMess
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OK Nathan! This chapter (24) actually had me sweating!! The ice statues crowding in, multiplying, the discovery, the BANGING!! Holy hell that shit was terrifying. So far so good. Evelyn and her drunk hubby can go outside in the next storm though cuz I'm sick of them both..
— Apr 06, 2025 10:18AM
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EliMess
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The POV jumping around every chapter is somthing I hope is more of like a set up for our main characters. I Wana see where this goes! The 2 chapters written from the POV of the couple in the car, John and Lisa, feel like it was written by someone else entirely. Cringe dialogue and repetitive writing. BUT, other than those 2, this book seems to be written pretty good!
— Apr 05, 2025 11:00AM
