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Alan
is 57% done
There's a few issues with the writing in this one, a couple of continuity errors and some general loose writing. But overall I'm impressed with the story. Bonus marks for including a section in the sewers as it's always a great place for some nastiness, especially given the limited light sources available to the survivors.
— Apr 08, 2025 12:12AM
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Alan
is 76% done
Eesh.. that segment was vile. Though I was kinda prepared for it after reading some reviews but man.. that took it bit far.
— Apr 08, 2025 04:58AM
Alan
is 31% done
The first couple of chapters were very creepy and well done. I love that whole imposter syndrome setup if had going with the smiling creeps. Nice stuff. Then there is a very gruesome scene in a rundown building that really pushes boundaries. Very lurid, gruesome and nasty mean spirited stuff.
— Apr 07, 2025 03:27PM
