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Camsicle
is on page 17 of 629
Adeline is in her mid twenties and she talks like a teenager. Constantly cursing like a child who just discovered bad words. I’m already seeing a major problem with this book with the dialogue. The author tells not shows. Also, Zade (love interest) has a rose on his chapter as the title. Idk if this is going to be a reoccurring thing but that png pixelated rose got me dead ass hellll chile💀
— Apr 08, 2025 01:14AM
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Camsicle
is on page 86 of 629
*clears throat* and I quote: “He develops a Vagina.” That’s it.
— Apr 19, 2025 02:20AM
Camsicle
is on page 33 of 629
Corny Corny Corny Corny!!! How does anyone get hooked into this book by the second chapter!? If i hear another curse word i might have to execute myself. The writing is so juvenile that it feels like I’m back in middle school searching up yn fanfictions before bed. I am having a good laugh though.
— Apr 09, 2025 02:06PM
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Before anyone judges me I’m purely reading this as a way to entertain myself because I have heard it’s BAD. And I’d like to put myself through that because apparently I hate myself.
— Apr 08, 2025 12:58AM