Camsicle’s Reviews > Haunting Adeline > Status Update

“after a pregnant pause.”

*clears throat* and I quote: “He develops a Vagina.” That’s it.

Corny Corny Corny Corny!!! How does anyone get hooked into this book by the second chapter!? If i hear another curse word i might have to execute myself. The writing is so juvenile that it feels like I’m back in middle school searching up yn fanfictions before bed. I am having a good laugh though.

Adeline is in her mid twenties and she talks like a teenager. Constantly cursing like a child who just discovered bad words. I’m already seeing a major problem with this book with the dialogue. The author tells not shows. Also, Zade (love interest) has a rose on his chapter as the title. Idk if this is going to be a reoccurring thing but that png pixelated rose got me dead ass hellll chile💀

Before anyone judges me I’m purely reading this as a way to entertain myself because I have heard it’s BAD. And I’d like to put myself through that because apparently I hate myself.