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“Angels, Lenore Dove told me, are humans with wings [...] A good world for good people to go to. But Lenore Dove is the winged being on my mind at the moment. If there is anything after the life I’m about to lose, will I be with her again? Like the guy in her song, I’d sure like to know.”
my eye is twitching. was an editor not present throughout this entire book? i swear i remember a more competent author.):
— Apr 12, 2025 12:50PM
my eye is twitching. was an editor not present throughout this entire book? i swear i remember a more competent author.):
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AJ
is 78% done
still have a problem with the writing but, fuck, if i'm not crying
— Apr 16, 2025 05:59PM
AJ
is 26% done
" "We’re wild like our chariot horses. I slugged our escort and Haymitch called out President Snow. Nobody pushes us around.”
“We’re unpredictable,” says Wyatt.
“Just a bunch of loose cannons,” I agree.
The Peacekeepers open the doors and we head in, sending out our best loose-cannon vibe. "
What. . . is this writing? Oh, my god. I'm literally gritting my teeth through every page. What happened here?
— Mar 24, 2025 03:08PM
“We’re unpredictable,” says Wyatt.
“Just a bunch of loose cannons,” I agree.
The Peacekeepers open the doors and we head in, sending out our best loose-cannon vibe. "
What. . . is this writing? Oh, my god. I'm literally gritting my teeth through every page. What happened here?
AJ
is 22% done
All I can say is. . . I'm trying to be nice about the writing, but it's hard. Incredibly juvenile, even for a YA. 😢
— Mar 21, 2025 05:40AM
