Love2LoveBooks’s Reviews > Vengeance & Sin > Status Update

Quite shocked by the high ratings for such basic storytelling and info dump on who all these people are instead of showing us through genuine connections and decent dialogue. Also, grammar check - you're supposed to finish dialogue with a comma then the 'he said' could end a sentence. The 'he said' isn't a new sentence. I don't get how so many writers don't know this. Going to keep going for now.