Tayler’s Reviews > When the Moon Hatched > Status Update
Tayler
is 29% done
won't stop talking about cocks & busts or using the words male/female :(
in all actuality, so far a perfectly average plot and characters, and slightly subpar writing/inventiveness. At times I feel as if I'm reading a teenager's first draft, and it often seems as if the author believes once you define something in a glossary there is no need to actually flesh it out in the story
— Apr 16, 2025 08:14AM
in all actuality, so far a perfectly average plot and characters, and slightly subpar writing/inventiveness. At times I feel as if I'm reading a teenager's first draft, and it often seems as if the author believes once you define something in a glossary there is no need to actually flesh it out in the story
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