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One chapter in and the writing style is already so bad I’m considering giving up
— Apr 17, 2025 06:23AM
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I’ve figured it out! Fletcher’s voice! His character speaks like he’s trying to trick people into believing he’s British
— Apr 25, 2025 11:48AM
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is on page 47 of 371
Okay so on one page you have an actual chapter dedicated to an excerpt from this author’s book within the book… and then the very next page begins a new chapter with ANOTHER excerpt from the book????
— Apr 20, 2025 08:50PM
Amy Gary
is on page 7 of 371
“but Alastor’s never done any in-person events, launch parties, face-to-face interviews, nada.” I hid a smile; she’d slowly adopted some of my Spanish phrases.
I’m gonna puke
— Apr 17, 2025 09:02AM
I’m gonna puke
Amy Gary
is on page 7 of 371
“But a decade in courtrooms had instructed me that anyone was capable of anything”
Instructed??? This is not the right word for this sentence. Where was the editor?!
— Apr 17, 2025 09:01AM
Instructed??? This is not the right word for this sentence. Where was the editor?!
Amy Gary
is on page 7 of 371
“The sun was a shameless lie, having burned off most of the fog, but I still couldn’t see Wolf Harbor Island over the horizon.“
A shameless lie??? What does that even mean??? It doesn’t make sense on its own and it makes even less sense contextually
— Apr 17, 2025 06:25AM
A shameless lie??? What does that even mean??? It doesn’t make sense on its own and it makes even less sense contextually

