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Crystal
Crystal is 35% done
im a bit uncomfortable with the ages of the women in relation to the ages of the men in this book. and I'm a bit confused about the heroine This, like how dumb can you be? you shoot a guy.....but don't mention it to the man who has come to rescue you. you all work through out the whole night, but you never once mention what just happened? and you waltz into town like everything is okay?
Aug 13, 2016 12:01AM
Lawless & Soulless

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Crystal
Crystal is 35% done
seriously is she stupid? I'm sooooo confused. the story is actually pretty interesting at this point. but this author has a problem adding too much drama. so not only is she wanted for a double murder, but the next second she steps in this town, she shoots another person, and waltzes into town like everything is okay? you don't think that will hinder your homicide case?is this to show how naive she is?uugggghhhhhh
Aug 13, 2016 12:02AM
Lawless & Soulless


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