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Carlo Adrian
is 91% done
"And I also want you to be my man of honor at the wedding. I know it’s not traditional, but I’m not a real traditional gal. Bruno and I have already talked. He loves it, of course"
This dialogue perfectly encapsulates my issue with the second half of this book. It's somehow rushing through the plot, telling-not-showing, and being bland, all at the same time. It's frustrating!
— Apr 22, 2025 10:34AM
This dialogue perfectly encapsulates my issue with the second half of this book. It's somehow rushing through the plot, telling-not-showing, and being bland, all at the same time. It's frustrating!
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Carlo Adrian’s Previous Updates
Carlo Adrian
is 65% done
Of course sex with Law is the magical cure for Remy's songwriting block lol this book is getting unserious
— Apr 21, 2025 07:39AM
Carlo Adrian
is 59% done
The more we learn about the past, the more I think Remy was really a bit of a shitty boyfriend in the past
— Apr 20, 2025 05:00PM
Carlo Adrian
is 53% done
The writing is a bit messy but what the hell I am invested
— Apr 20, 2025 06:25AM
Carlo Adrian
is 33% done
Lawson you're feelings are valid! You're allowed to be an asshole to him!
— Apr 19, 2025 11:55PM
Carlo Adrian
is 20% done
This is a great start! And wow Law never met Remy's parents after five years of dating?? whaaaat
— Apr 19, 2025 09:11AM
