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Writing style still not working for me. Too young & simple, overall not very well written.
— Apr 23, 2025 07:35PM
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Apr 23, 2025 07:39PM
Have also noticed a lot of misused punctuation, primarily commas in the wrong spots. I don't claim to be an expert on comma usage, but I'm talking sentences that sound awkward as hell or straight up don't make sense as they've been written.
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