Nadine M’s Reviews > Royal Savage > Status Update

Spoiler, I’m sorry but wtf. How can you fall deeply and madly all consuming love in less than a month. Which is admits that’s how long she’s know royal for. A than he just pisses off a she is destroyed and can’t eat or sleep. I’m sorry but what the hell

More repeating all on the one damn page
•fuck, I can’t stop thinking about being inside of you this way
• gently kisses me, while rolling his hips and moving inside of me
• it feels so good to have him inside of me

Anyone would think she really likes him inside of her 🤦🏼‍♀️

Okay I found out why the writing icks me. It seems to be written by a bloody teenager, the repetitive writing of “there’s no better feeling in the world having you inside me” “her throbbing pussy” “I need her pussy her throbbing pussy“ “I need you to be inside me” the word pussy is legit used every single chapter and sometimes more than twice lol

I’m struggling to connect with both characters. The dialogue is abit stiff and the story line is jumpy.
Royal seems typical rough head biker but Avalon went from zero to boom in like 3 seconds. How can some things not raise a red flag

“I couldn’t turn my eyes away. I wanted her, needed her…and desired her. One glimpse into her big, curious eye and my cock twitched, wanting a fucking taste”. Who the fuck thinks like that when they first see someone. Not even 20 pages into the book 🤦🏼‍♀️