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I FREAKIN KNEW IT. I knew Patrick had more of a part to play in Hawkes past just wasn’t 100% of what exactly. But damn, nothing better than a catholic dickhead getting served the justice he truly deserves.

This time round the mention of the lip ring from fmc is annoying. Like okay we know he has one that he likes to play with but enough already. Also the constant lovey dovey narrative. Seems a tad overkill

Argh. This book has me in the biggest chokehold, I do not want to ever put it down.

I skipped over the trigger warning part, does it bother me. No not really, what does bother me is the mfc preaching about her dislike for pretenders while pretending to love and be faithful to her bf lol. But with a damn tatted up hottie like Hawke can’t say I blame the chick. I’m waiting for that juicy past plot line 🤤

Only dislike so far is the third person narrative. Finding it hard to understands who’s pov it is

Hang on the jump between the start of chapter 36. Royal is camped out in some shitty motel and than at the end after Avalons pov he has spent time behind bars for assaulting a bloke

Spoiler, I’m sorry but wtf. How can you fall deeply and madly all consuming love in less than a month. Which is admits that’s how long she’s know royal for. A than he just pisses off a she is destroyed and can’t eat or sleep. I’m sorry but what the hell

More repeating all on the one damn page
•fuck, I can’t stop thinking about being inside of you this way
• gently kisses me, while rolling his hips and moving inside of me
• it feels so good to have him inside of me

Anyone would think she really likes him inside of her 🤦🏼‍♀️

Okay I found out why the writing icks me. It seems to be written by a bloody teenager, the repetitive writing of “there’s no better feeling in the world having you inside me” “her throbbing pussy” “I need her pussy her throbbing pussy“ “I need you to be inside me” the word pussy is legit used every single chapter and sometimes more than twice lol

I’m struggling to connect with both characters. The dialogue is abit stiff and the story line is jumpy.
Royal seems typical rough head biker but Avalon went from zero to boom in like 3 seconds. How can some things not raise a red flag

“I couldn’t turn my eyes away. I wanted her, needed her…and desired her. One glimpse into her big, curious eye and my cock twitched, wanting a fucking taste”. Who the fuck thinks like that when they first see someone. Not even 20 pages into the book 🤦🏼‍♀️

The author redeemed ari in this part against Ida. I love a queen who will put one in place for the person they love. It takes true loyalty

Soooo he pushes her away because he’s worried he will hurt her. Than is upset when after all the pushing she has sunken into a miserable stage of loving and wanting someone who refuses to accept their love. This is an ick for me. He knows how mind fucked she’s been in the past. Just talk about it like adults

Argh ida you stupid woman !! From one mother to an egg donor, you would’ve been a horrible “mother”. A child, let alone a baby of rape is never to blame. I truly disliked that play out of the scene but hoping it brings closure to gray.

I don’t like how he is punishing Aria, if he truly thought he prayed upon her vulnerability he wouldn’t of waited months to get with her 🤦🏼‍♀️

So she’s upset that Gray/Ash is still texting Nyx, even thou she is not being straight up an playing with his feeling through the platform. This school yard shit is hard to look past. I get the insecurities, I’m a typical size 16 woman after having four babies nothing is firm anymore but she can’t keep playing victim when she’s not helping the situation. She should tell Ash she is seeing someone.

Pray Jesus hallelujah, it happened the build up to it all happened.

I was a wee let down in some aspect the tension building between the two characters didn’t flow into the seggs scene but hopefully just the tip of the iceberg

Argh I’m over half way in this book and the continuous back an fourth bull crap about them both knowing one is ash and nyx but not being grown enough to tell each other. Like wtf. She even stated to gray about if he had intentions for someone he like don’t lead her on be upfront. But yet she plays dumb school girl and continues to live in her stupid non existent love bubble *forehead slap*

Honestly loving it, but it’s a very slow burner. The short chapters and back n fourth exchanges between Gray and Ari is exhausting. So far I’m just waiting for the combustion and praying the middle part of the book kicks into gear

They’ve all expressed that they still want me. Mental boost to the confidence honey I don’t think you are a naive virgin girl anymore. You are so full of yourself you don’t need an orgy to fill all your holes to the brim 🤦🏼‍♀️

Hot tub scene. Ronan, Conner, Margo, Henry & Abbi

What the fuck! So they all gana strip an jump in the tub with no sexual intentions and Abbi being like, “I’ve been with all of them before, they’ve all wanted me, I remind myself” okay love. Don’t let ya tickets fly