Melissa’s Reviews > Pretend Boyfriend > Status Update
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is 11% done
The writing itself is fine. I am not sure I like the characters yet. It's still early so time will tell.
— Aug 15, 2016 05:17AM
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Melissa
is 30% done
Hmm, the writing is still ok but it doesn't flow well from person to person, thought to thought, or scene to scene. And there is a lot of winking which is getting annoying. Especially since said "winker" is "straight." That really bugs me.
— Aug 16, 2016 09:22AM
