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Celestine
is 70% done
"He’d point blank told me I was his woman, which had to mean he was my man. He was doing everything he could to keep me protected and I felt an urgent need to give back to him in the only way I could." -- I think I just threw up a little in my mouth.
— Aug 18, 2016 08:49AM
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Celestine
is 38% done
"I took a deep breath, drawing her scent into my lungs as I ran my palms over her back. She’d been shot. A bullet had ripped through her silky soft skin and it had happened under my watch. I didn’t know if I would ever forgive myself, or if she would ever forgive me for putting her at risk." Corny, cliched and copycat.
— Aug 18, 2016 05:45AM
Celestine
is 23% done
Stylistically, I am struggling. The delivery is choppy and the first-person narration voice-overs keep pulling me out of the story.
— Aug 17, 2016 07:12AM
