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There are semantic errors strewn in, that let you stumble: "Although she only lived a few blocks away ... Stephanie left ... on foot."
Also when you go explicitly buying and using a gun (on the range) there should be a little more attention on the details. For instance, ".45 mm" is totally bullshit. Either use imperial or metric. But not both together.
— Aug 21, 2016 01:15AM
Also when you go explicitly buying and using a gun (on the range) there should be a little more attention on the details. For instance, ".45 mm" is totally bullshit. Either use imperial or metric. But not both together.
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