Everette’s Reviews > Children of Dune > Status Update

Couldn't sleep so I finished the book tonight. I'm losing hope for this story. I think we'll come back after a break, but idk... Maybe I believed in it too much. I could actually start a religion with the memory-content stuff.
It is exactly what I like but the author writes so weird; I feel like I'm being manipulated — staggered — by cadence. It's also getting lazy, lol. It could have used a couple more chapters.

He has finally joined as one with the desert fish and is now become superhuman. I miss the good old days before I knew of this monster. I can't believe they have my guy leaping violently like Superman. I have so many questions. I'll be at the dentist tmrw and I wonder if they'll let me read while they work on me, bc this plot is thickening quickly. I'm like $100,000 richer now, and I know there is still more to come!

Still no worm-Leto... But I'm glad that *one twist* was revealed about The Preacher. The Atreides family, or rather, the Harkonnen side of it, is surely bound to crumble soon.

i thought I'd have much more time to read this summer, but I've been pretty busy... inbetween summer classes, moving, making friends, seeing my first concert, and attending to rather pernicious appointments. it's been hectic, and fun.
anyways i think my dad spoiled this book for me, talking about how Leto becomes a worm. he showed me some fan art and i couldn't help but laugh. I'll remain patient, but eager.