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She sits across the table
I sneak glances,
listening for the music of
fingers against hair.
She combs,
pulls her hair back
tight, rolls it
around a finger, scrunches it
holding a shaggy mess.
For half a bachelor’s she does this.
But I like to see it like this.
Not because it is messy.
it is because of the way
her hair falls
when she releases the bundle.
Easily, like the curtains
around a low sun in the evening.
— May 07, 2025 02:31AM
I sneak glances,
listening for the music of
fingers against hair.
She combs,
pulls her hair back
tight, rolls it
around a finger, scrunches it
holding a shaggy mess.
For half a bachelor’s she does this.
But I like to see it like this.
Not because it is messy.
it is because of the way
her hair falls
when she releases the bundle.
Easily, like the curtains
around a low sun in the evening.
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May 07, 2025 12:43PM
I’m vibing with this Lee so far. I love how he’s all about the little things giving joy juxtaposing the constant sadness of life
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