Ed’s Reviews > Evil Omega > Status Update

The author doesn't use the Oxford comma. :( Also the opposite of run-on sentences; breaking them up into 2 sentences when they should be 1. Still reads like summaries. I'm just reading what's happening, I'm not feeling it or connecting to it. It's all tell, no show.

This reads like...how do I say this? Like someone read a book and now they're writing a summary for it, chapter by chapter.