Ed’s Reviews > Evil Omega > Status Update
Ed
is 72% done
The author doesn't use the Oxford comma. :( Also the opposite of run-on sentences; breaking them up into 2 sentences when they should be 1. Still reads like summaries. I'm just reading what's happening, I'm not feeling it or connecting to it. It's all tell, no show.
— May 09, 2025 08:50AM
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Ed
is 40% done
This reads like...how do I say this? Like someone read a book and now they're writing a summary for it, chapter by chapter.
— May 07, 2025 11:09PM