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Donna Walczak
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The art style is beautiful. The story and dialog is a little juvenile. It doesn't feel like a story about goblins and fae. It feels like a story about a regular kid with a veneer of goblins and fae.
I do appreciate that one of the hunters seems to know something about the supernatural. It's not a lot, but it's done depth.
— May 08, 2025 10:16PM
I do appreciate that one of the hunters seems to know something about the supernatural. It's not a lot, but it's done depth.
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Donna Walczak
is on page 182 of 184
Huh?
I'm sorry, what? What exactly was I supposed to learn here? How not to write a fight scene?
Why is he legendary?
Ehhh, 3 ⭐️s
— May 12, 2025 02:32PM
I'm sorry, what? What exactly was I supposed to learn here? How not to write a fight scene?
Why is he legendary?
Ehhh, 3 ⭐️s
Donna Walczak
is on page 167 of 184
Using giant shark jaws as a really cool Arch is so goated. 10/10 castle design.
— May 12, 2025 02:26PM
Donna Walczak
is on page 156 of 184
1. Riding on a giant, white, wolf mount would be the coolest thing.
2. I live the past off of giving the old swamp witch the seeds.
— May 12, 2025 02:20PM
2. I live the past off of giving the old swamp witch the seeds.
Donna Walczak
is on page 113 of 184
Oh wow. She actually wasn't planning on eating your face. . . . My bad. 🤷♀️
— May 12, 2025 02:00PM
Donna Walczak
is on page 108 of 184
Oh yeah, I'm suuuure this woman has no intention of eating you whatsoever. ✋️🫳
— May 12, 2025 01:57PM
Donna Walczak
is on page 91 of 184
The art is beautiful, but I'm starting to really see why the share library system only had the first volume.
The art shows not look like it belongs to this story. The writing is like that of a little kid's show. Think Blue's Clues, not Avatar.
— May 11, 2025 10:45PM
The art shows not look like it belongs to this story. The writing is like that of a little kid's show. Think Blue's Clues, not Avatar.
Donna Walczak
is on page 65 of 184
Remember what I said about veneers and juvenile writing? Yeah.
— May 08, 2025 10:38PM
Donna Walczak
is on page 63 of 184
I really like the concept of this large chamber in a cave with several offshoots, the mouths to those internal caves being the mouths in giant skulls.
That begs the question of some neat world lore. We're they giants? Did they die here? If so, what caused it? Was it a burial ground? A village? Where the skulls brought here after death? Maybe it was part of some cultural ritual.
— May 08, 2025 10:36PM
That begs the question of some neat world lore. We're they giants? Did they die here? If so, what caused it? Was it a burial ground? A village? Where the skulls brought here after death? Maybe it was part of some cultural ritual.
