Jeannie’s Reviews > Kuxtal Academy: The Beginning > Status Update

Jeannie
Jeannie is 25% done
14 chapters in, and so far, I'm very disappointed. The prose is below average, even for YA romantasy, sadly, and the scenes don't flow well at all. And there is far too much swearing in an attempt to make the characters seem cool and badass. The biggest problem is that almost nothing has happened. The first vaguely interesting bit of plot is in ch14. I might force myself to the halfway mark as it's a book club read.
May 10, 2025 03:28AM
Kuxtal Academy: The Beginning (Kuxtal Academy #1)

1 like ·  flag

Jeannie’s Previous Updates

Jeannie
Jeannie is 30% done
I'm about 30% in, and I'm just shocked at how poorly written this is! There are so many incomplete sentences, incorrect words used (like 'gracious' instead of 'graceful'), missing commas, commas where there shouldn't be commas etc. The scenes are difficult to follow because of how poorly they flow, and the characters' actions are often non-sensical. The rave reviews on this book are also remarkably similar...
May 11, 2025 02:58PM
Kuxtal Academy: The Beginning (Kuxtal Academy #1)


Comments Showing 1-1 of 1 (1 new)

dateUp arrow    newest »

message 1: by Sana⁷ (new)

Sana⁷ I'm so sorry to hear it, my friend! I hope that it will change for the better (but probably will not)!


back to top