Moodreadinggal’s Reviews > What Lies Beyond the Veil > Status Update

Sorry but holding back on pleasuring you to force to you tell him you love his not hot. The girl has perfect normal reservations; I'm not fucking with this boy. You may be hot but what else...

Woohoo finally a character addressing the elephant in the room. More of that

The moment something interesting was happening, this guy pops up out of nowhere horney af. Dude it seems like the moment thier is some crushal info fmc should be focused on he seduces her.

2 seconds ago this dude was doing something suspicious. And now your making out. Girl priorities

I'm getting the ick from his insisting that she need to "claim him" you just met has it even been a month you know nothing about one another. Calm down buddy, just because your insanely possessive (not the cutest trait) doesn't mean she's the same. The amount of jealous talk in the past 10% of this book non stop is a bit much

I feel like this went from so fast pased to so slow which the main character just constantly thinking the same thoughts over and over again. Something needs to happen. And I wish they held off the romance a bit longer. Fmc need to question things more like girl. Also what happen to all the stuff with your brother...

Leggings?? Really Stockings makes more sense am i wrong. Modern verbiage is so off putting at times