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Abby
Abby is 50% done
Clunky - someone wrote a review saying the plot was clunky. That's the word I was looking for this whole time. It just doesn't... flow? Like maybe it could work? If you're into that? Maybe?
May 13, 2025 05:23AM
Haunting Adeline (Cat and Mouse, #1)

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Abby
Abby is 53% done
I wish I hadn't bought this, I wish I'd rented it from the library or something, although idk if I'd want that on my library record. No one so far has been haunted, the only ghost has felt very out of place because it came after it had been established that the setting was a more normal world and there was no indication of spirituality before this. Seemed like a weird plot device to help Addy find the journals.
May 15, 2025 12:27AM
Haunting Adeline (Cat and Mouse, #1)


Abby
Abby is 47% done
I did think there'd be more haunting in this. I knew there were some NSFW scenes but I thought the plot would be better and the NSFW scenes would be less... Idk what it thought I was going to read it wasn't this though lol
May 11, 2025 09:11AM
Haunting Adeline (Cat and Mouse, #1)


Abby
Abby is 25% done
I'm kind of getting the vibe of "don't worry its ok that he's a stalker cause he is a genius hacker who stops human trafficking rings that senators show their faces on video being in" ok bro sure thing - hopefully there's more to it im only 4 hours in
Apr 28, 2025 03:21AM
Haunting Adeline (Cat and Mouse, #1)


Abby
Abby is 25% done
Apr 28, 2025 03:20AM
Haunting Adeline (Cat and Mouse, #1)


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