Crystal’s Reviews > Hearts On Fire > Status Update

Opposing Sides:I find it funny that a book about a girl tutoring a football player that needs help with English assignments, specifically grammatical errors, has so many typos and grammatical issues. For example, "she used her phone on her camera to take a picture." Aside from that, the characters are okay and the plot ends in a nice spot for a series.

Crossing the Line:I'm just not interested enough to continue the story. The characters are okay, but the plot doesn't go far enough to make you want to buy part 2 and finish the story.

Patriotic Duty:I just didn't like this book. Too many editing errors. The writing was more telling than showing. You are told what the characters did and aren't drawn into the story. The characters don't feel in love, more like hot for each other and in lust.

The only part is the book I liked was the last chapter. The writing shifted, the characters become more real, and there are a couple of good lines.

Saving Forever: A lot of of editing errors and I'm not sure where the plot line is headed. There's really no problems to solve or bad guy to thwart. Overall, it makes the story really dull. The beginning of a relationship between Charity and Elijah is off to a nice start though. I just wish the story had more excitement to really pull you into the story. There's no conflict to keep things interesting.

Michel is super creepy. I just don't like Reed's character. He thinks with the wrong head too much. The story could also use a little editing. Parts do not agree with what has already happened.

My Despicable Ex- not bad and not great. This book has some editing errors. It cuts off at a point that makes you want to pick up the next one and see how it ends.

Alyssa's Redemption- I recommend skipping this one

Second Chances - Part I I would not buy this book for two reasons. First I don't like incomplete books. It's like watching a TV show that suddenly ends in 'To Be Continued'. Second, the book was only interesting when the stalker makes an appearance. The rest of it is just not interesting enough to pull you in.