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I think I have figured out what my issue with this is. It’s supposed to be a romance and I am just not feeling the chemistry between the FMC and MMC. I just don’t feel it so their scenes together aren’t impactful for me.

— May 14, 2025 10:53AM

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BethMcD 🧚🏼‍♀️ is 88% done

Margaret’s story is the most interesting thing about this story. Would’ve been better if her story was the main focus. Like delve into her and Cosmo’s romance more!
Hayden and Alice are boring and lack chemistry hardcore.

— May 18, 2025 11:55AM

BethMcD 🧚🏼‍♀️ is 73% done

I think I just listened to a spicy scene? Not 100% because I zoned out for all of it. Also apparently he’s in love with her too? Based on nothing…..uggghhh Emily why’d you do me like this?!

— May 15, 2025 07:37PM

BethMcD 🧚🏼‍♀️ is 58% done

UGH! I now they’re in love?! Based on what?! There’s been like no freaking build up! 😤

— May 14, 2025 07:35PM

BethMcD 🧚🏼‍♀️ is 43% done

Yeah I’m having a hard time getting through this one. Maybe it’s me, but these characters and this story are just not super compelling for me. Not badly written or conceptualized but kinda boring to me. 🤷🏼‍♀️

— May 13, 2025 11:52AM

BethMcD 🧚🏼‍♀️ is 27% done

Ugh it’s just not grabbing me like Funny Story, Book Lovers and Happy Place. 😭

— May 08, 2025 12:50AM

BethMcD 🧚🏼‍♀️ is 15% done

So far it’s ok but it’s not an immediate hit so far. We shall seeeeeeee!

— May 05, 2025 01:14AM

BethMcD 🧚🏼‍♀️ is 12% done

— May 04, 2025 11:53AM