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Crystal
Crystal is 2% done
I want to like this book. I absolutely love the premise… it combines the tropes I love MC and secret baby. But….. how it goes from such potential to absolute shit within the first 5 pages I am unsure. I kind of like the banter between mammoth and Riley initially but then, she does a time lapse of them sitting and talking which you can’t do when introducing characters then she suddenly wants to have sex? Wtf?!!
May 14, 2025 04:36PM
Beautiful Lie (Satan's Outlaws, #2)

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