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Nicole
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Ex2. They are sitting down to eat at his house and her heat starts to come on. After they satisfy her enough for her to eat something before full heat hits, he orders food for them like the meal they literally just sat down to eat had disappeared
— May 15, 2025 04:28PM
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Nicole
is 27% done
Some of the bad writing is getting to me.
Ex1. He convinces her to accept a ride home with Tacos and the whole exchange is giving the impression he’s going with her. Then inexplicably he doesn’t go with her and there are no tacos. Next chapter he again tempts her with Mexican food but it’s like it’s the first time he’s done like he didn’t already tell her about his favorite Mexican food truck
— May 15, 2025 04:25PM
Ex1. He convinces her to accept a ride home with Tacos and the whole exchange is giving the impression he’s going with her. Then inexplicably he doesn’t go with her and there are no tacos. Next chapter he again tempts her with Mexican food but it’s like it’s the first time he’s done like he didn’t already tell her about his favorite Mexican food truck
