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i don't really like the tense for some reason.. it being fully in the past with no indication of when the present is/why it's being told like it is strange. i might just chalk it up to translation issues, but it's hard to ignore. pendantic, but annoying.
i also dislike how exposition + dialogue heavy the prose as well. the reader isn't really left with anything to sit with, just pages of monologs. idk