Hailey’s Reviews > Silver Elite > Status Update

Same thoughts as before - writing is still a little clunky, but it’s fun and keeping me engaged

I was on the struggle bus at first, the writing wasn’t working for me. I felt like there weren’t enough descriptors and couldn’t picture anything, like what the landscape, or even what our main character looked like. We’re dropped in the middle of this world and left to trust that things will be explained. It picked up around 10-15% for me and is going better now