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Coke
is 52% done
Writing or story still haven't improved. Rage finishing it at this point. A continued annoyance is the reference to text messages sent in the past as being heard rather that read. “Do you know how it felt to hear you say all those things?” ...you read the words on a screen.
— May 22, 2025 06:50PM
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Coke
is 90% done
Continuity anyone? This author has yet to finish a car ride. Characters pull over for emotional chat, then once the chat is finished they have magically arrived at the destination.
— May 23, 2025 06:18AM
Coke
is 40% done
Nearly halfway and Parker is still unlikable. I feel as thought the author is attempting to use his fathers passing as his vulnerability but its barely explored and really just mentioned in passing. There is little to no emotional impact from the story. It's excessively shallow.
— May 22, 2025 04:51PM
Coke
is 21% done
Situational awareness, Parker after tinkering with Brandons car gets it to start again but they walk arm and arm back to the training facility, leaving the car running on the side of the road? It's moments like this that take me out of the story, because I'm like "whats going on?" Feels like the author is just rushing to the next chapter. Low writing quality.
— May 22, 2025 02:41PM