Dramallamasoctopus’s Reviews > Fire Falling > Status Update

Okay so the writing IS better but def still a lil juvenile for my tastes. It is however appropriate I think for the age range this book targets. I wish the emotions were done better in this book as a whole. I feel like the plot is moving forward fs but there’s a lot of missing context about the characters’ motivations and personalities but still like the plot enough to continue reading