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is 39% done
Okay... not happy with their first sexual encounter. I understand Daniel's grief fueled emotional volatility, and it makes sense that he'd throw himself at Rayne just to feel someone's touch. But I'd have a hell of a lot more respect for Rayne if he turned Dan down--you're clearly not in your right mind, and I am, so I'm going to gently stop this before you do something you'll regret. But nope. He goes for it.
— May 26, 2025 09:40AM
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Lee
is 70% done
So we're now getting into the genre/story I expected, almost 8 hours in... quite a few hours late for it imo... and also imo... the romance should bloom an hour or so after THIS, not however long ago it actually did. Yknow, they're roped into an adventure together and THEN fall for each other at the end. Also, took a while for the Jason reveal we all knew was coming since the start.
— May 26, 2025 01:08PM
Lee
is 61% done
Past while has been too focused on sex & the somewhat uncomfortable and too-fast relationship with Rayne, not enough on story.. like, what happened to the archaeology dig?
— May 26, 2025 11:47AM
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May 26, 2025 09:45AM
Kudos to this book for acknowledging that this is not a romantic or happy scene though, because I've read a few that do not realize that this kind of thing is.. a bit icky. And just have the characters immediately move on once they've gotten their dick wet with another person.
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Neither Daniel or Rayne are happy with it. So that's good. 👍
