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Emma
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I have just a few questions:
Why does Persephone like Hades?
Why does Hades like Persephone?
When Persephone finds out she’s pregnant like a week after saying she doesn’t want to get pregnant why does she literally not think say or do anything- she just plans a random party???? Whyyyy
This book makes Acotar look like a literary masterpiece which is saying something.
— May 27, 2025 04:39AM
Why does Persephone like Hades?
Why does Hades like Persephone?
When Persephone finds out she’s pregnant like a week after saying she doesn’t want to get pregnant why does she literally not think say or do anything- she just plans a random party???? Whyyyy
This book makes Acotar look like a literary masterpiece which is saying something.
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Emma
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Pg 120 “As she waded through the grass she came upon a bright red ball. Strange, Persephone thought. It was larger than a normal ball, almost the size of her head...”
Literally what the hell is a ‘normal ball’? With writing this bad I’d at least like for Persephone to be a girls girl. She is not. Or have any motivations besides being a transparent plot device. Alas. This books is nonsense.
— May 26, 2025 01:25PM
Literally what the hell is a ‘normal ball’? With writing this bad I’d at least like for Persephone to be a girls girl. She is not. Or have any motivations besides being a transparent plot device. Alas. This books is nonsense.