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Something was missing in the setup of that first chapter. Those conversations did not sound like they were between people who had never met before AT ALL.
— May 28, 2025 05:22AM
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Mara Bowden
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What do you mean the 19 year old NHL player went to a steakhouse and got wine?? You already talked about how he’s too young to legally drink earlier and now he is in a restaurant where people can obviously recognize him and has a glass of wine? Something tells me this wasn’t edited enough.
— May 28, 2025 02:07PM